Which lead does a better job of drawing the reader into the story?
The first one because the lead leaves the readers wondering why she would just want a bookshelf. To most people bookshelf does not mean much but for Codi, it means something significant and the readers would continue to read to find out why.
What is the angle/focus of each story?
The focus of Codi Mills' story is how she naturally liked reading books at a young age and how that ties to her passion in photography.
The focus for Nick Esposito's story is the difference in what his passion is compare to what he seems to be passionate about. Nick comes from a baseball family and have involvement in the baseball community but his passion is in Classic Rock
Which story did you like better and why?
I liked Esposito's story better because it describes the depth of his passion for Classic Rock. The lead sentence for Mill's drew my attention more but the content of Esposito's story was fruitful about his passion while Mill's passion of photography seemed to be briefly summarized.
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